This is one of the best cold emails ever. But here a 3 ways that it could be even better: 1. Create a hook The subject line needs a better hook than "internship." e.g., "Snapchat feedback from 10 high schoolers + internship" 2. Add value Give first, then ask. e.g., "I spoke to 10 classmates, here's a doc with quotes on how Snapchat can be better." 3. Make a low-effort ask A simple "How" is much better than "Want to schedule some time to chat?" But the ask could be even more specific. e.g., "Can you forward this to a recruiter?"