I finished the @SinkingStarGame demo, and I only have a single critique, because it is absolutely bloody fantastic. There are far too many tutorials and spoilers. Of course, the game isn't done, so some of these may be made more implicit, or conveyed through gameplay rather than talking at the player eventually, but this stuff really has to go. It immediately and unavoidably robbed me of the chance to explore the world, and figure out how things work on my own.